The provided diagram illustrates the process of producing drinking water from rainwater in a town in Australia.
It can be apparently seen from the graph that the process of making rainwater drinkable requires 5 stages in total. It starts with the collecting of rainwater, follows various treating steps and ends with the availability of drinkable water for households.
Looking at the diagram for detail, the initial phase of the process involves gathering rainwater through domestic pipe systems before filtering the collected water in the subsequent step. At the next stage of the process, the filtered water flows via the pipes into a tank for storage purposes.
In the fourth stage of the process, the stored water continues to flow to the following water container to be treated with chemicals. The process ends when the water that has undergone the treating stage is pumped back to residents’ houses for usage as drinking water.
- The chart below shows changes in three different areas of crime in manchester city centre from 2003 to 2012 78
- The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years 73
- Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- It is suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals Do the advantages Aof this outweigh its disadvantages 89
- The charts show information concerning speed camera use together with statistics on road accidents for the city of Melbourne 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25657894737 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70418746533 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.381979788 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.142857143 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265066856606 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137594892226 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753390064045 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181789858316 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611102743302 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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