The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water
The diagram gives information about the rainwater collection process used for drinking in a particular Australian town.
In general, there are five steps in total, starting with collecting stormwater, and ending with being distributed to households.
At the beginning of the process, the rain which falls on the rooftop is collected by the long waterspout and flows through the drainage system under the grounds. Water continues going down the pipelines to the bottom. Each house collects water in this way. The next step is the impurities process which includes four steps in total. Firstly, water is treated to remove plastic, and rubbish, followed by small particles. Bacteria and viruses are sterilized from the water before taking out molecules and salt.
After the filter, water goes from storage to the water treatment where water is treated with chemicals called Chlorine, at a concentration of 4 mg/liter. Finally, when the water is ready to be used, it runs from underneath the ground to people’s houses, ready to be drunk from the tap.
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- Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult Others believe that it is getting easier Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050 sample ielts thanh loan 84
- The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full time and part time students about its services 80
- The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h includes four steps in total. Firstly, water is treated to remove plastic, and ...
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Line 4, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...houses, ready to be drunk from the tap.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68111426508 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652941176471 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2862571391 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265153089994 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980827080596 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105971936324 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166453080566 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132788665577 0.0819641961636 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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