The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram illustrates how rainwater is collected and purified into drinking water in a town in Australia.
Overall, in the process, there are four fundamental stages in the rainwater treatment of an Australian town. The initial stage involves collecting water from the rain and the final step is delivering clean, fresh drinking water to townspeople.
The first stage is to assemble rainwater from all households and pass it through the same drain to the filter machine, where all the minuscule particles and impurities are extracted from the untreated water. After that, the filtered water will be stored in a separate zone before the main treatment. In the following phase of the process, the unfiltered water from the reservoir is subjected to chemical purification, transforming it from non-drinkable to drinkable water for people. After treatment, the final step is the distribution of potable water to fulfil the town’s residential units’ daily consumption, including cooking and showering.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49677419355 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02513920699 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606451612903 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4192316319 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.714285714 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239231799687 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120193052848 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808543158295 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203422267579 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742303838203 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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