Regarding to the diagram in the screen i'll explain how to the austrakian people in the town collected the rain water for drinking.
When the rain water is falling to the ground the rain water automatically will fulfill the drain around the houses in an australian town.
The rain fulfill the special storage that available there, then the water will pass many storages and steps the will filter the rain water.
So after passing four storages that will be the basic filter for the water, then the rain water flow into the machine which will filter out the bacteria and viruses.
Next step the water flow into the storage called water treatmen. This storage will filter the water in it and all the hazardous chemical content.
Well, the last step is the water ready to distributed to all the houses in an australian town.
So, this those are the steps filtering the rain water in an australian town.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... collected the rain water for drinking. When the rain water is falling to the ground...
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Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'fulfills'.
Suggestion: fulfills
...houses in an australian town. The rain fulfill the special storage that available the...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. The rain fulfill the special storage that available there, then the water wil...
^^
Line 4, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing four storages that will be the basic filter for the water, then the rain wate...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74050632911 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21023858953 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474683544304 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6173276698 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.625 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270301869101 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15511419669 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860137521628 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169545536995 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821666320495 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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