A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
1. Give contact details for when you are away
2. Give instructions about how to care for your pet
3. Describe other household duties
You do not need to write any addresses.
Dear Arthur,
Thank you very much for your kindness to help me out by look after my house and Iggy! While I’m still at Japan, you can contact me through direct message on instagram and twitter or chat me on LINE, I will make sure to respond as soon as possible. As for urgencies matters, you could ask the help of Alice, she’s a good friend of mine that living next door. Anyway, since my munchkin Iggy is really picky about his food, I wrote down a mini list of foods that fits his taste which are fish, sausage, and dumplings. He needs to be washed twice a week, I placed his shampoo near the mirror in the bathroom, don’t forget to use the hairdryer afterwards. Oh, that bundle of sunshine of mine really loves to play around and getting tons of affections, don’t skip cuddling session with him every 4 PM and make sure you give massages to his head. The last but not the least, I would like you to keep in mind that my house needs to be cleaned once a day, throw the garbage to the public trash bin across the road, and water my plants in the morning and noon. That’s all from me, hope it won’t trouble you much, I really am grateful to have you as my friend. I will make sure to treat you pizza with a lot of pepperoni on top once I’m back.
Matta ne!
Ferin.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1192, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun pepperoni seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of pepperonis'.
Suggestion: a lot of pepperonis
... will make sure to treat you pizza with a lot of pepperoni on top once I’m back. Matta ne! Ferin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, look, really, so, still, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 5.60731707317 731% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21951219512 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0594797413 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 106.607317073 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662601626016 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 1.53170731707 783% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.4806128035 43.030603864 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201231476308 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704613737797 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626396708399 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203052492457 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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