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Lifespan of the hobey bee starts when female bees lay one or two eggs every three days. After 9-10 days, eggs hatch and honey bees are ready to live anymore within 5 days. Then, they try to get accustomed to living their life within 7 days. At that time, their nymphes moult three times as they grow day by day. Next process is followed by being adult. Honey bees live adult period of their life in this process. After 4 days, they turn into mature bees. After that, they have new eggs to spawn just like their mothers did 34 or 36 days ago. It can be understood that their average life cycle is 34 or 36 days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 493.0 965.302439024 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 118.0 196.424390244 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17796610169 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.29587325169 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.73024616615 2.65546596893 65% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.71186440678 0.547539520022 130% => OK
syllable_count: 145.8 283.868780488 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.6562930679 43.030603864 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.7777777778 112.824112599 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.1111111111 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 5.23603664747 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177900807945 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801945423141 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860160766036 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177900807945 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 13.2329268293 36% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 61.2550243902 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 10.3012195122 35% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.08 11.4140731707 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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