The diagram shows the life cycle of honey bee.
The process describes how honey bee grow from egg to mature individuals.
According to the process, the life cycle of the honey bee has four main stages taking 34-36 days.
It can be seen, the life cycle of the honey bee begins when the females lay 1 or 2 eggs every three days. About 9-10 days later, each egg hatches and normal called “Nymph”.
At the following stage, the “Nymph” begins to moults 3 times as it grows. The first moulting it the 5th day after the egg hatches, then the second time is 7 days later, and the last time is 9 days later. This stage lasts for 21 days. After each moulting, their length will gradual incrase. Finally, the young adult emerges from all moulting stage, and over the next 4 days, it reaches full maturity
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'moult'.
Suggestion: moult
... stage, the 'Nymph' begins to moults 3 times as it grows. The first moulting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 631.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 138.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57246376812 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54578944501 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68115942029 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 177.3 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4518219599 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1111111111 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177911851491 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815884155938 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121748759961 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1604931596 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108588380314 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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