The diagram shows the life cycle of a honey bee ,
The diagram illustrate the life cycle of a honey bee. It is clear that the life cycle takes between 34 to 36 days. Also, there are five distinct stages beginning with egg and ending with bee.
Initially, the female bee lays from one to two eggs every three days, eggs, which is the first stage takes approximately ten days to hatch. Gradually, the next stage takes five days, which begins to form its small head and four tiny legs. At this point of the cycle, the legs appear in order to prepare the bee for its future life. Eventually, during the period from 21 days to 30 days, the nymph moults up to three times as it grows in size. As a result, the nymph forms into young adult with larger body, and its skin has shaped. The final stage of the process is when the young adult takes 4 days to maturity, and become a mature bee.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The diagram illustrate the life cycle of a honey bee. It is cl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26582278481 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.97431836935 2.65546596893 74% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632911392405 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8317797177 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.8888888889 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232551556428 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132679880998 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.213970293996 0.0843802449381 254% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254496745319 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175791527309 0.0819641961636 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 11.4140731707 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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