The diagram shows the life cycle of a salmon
The picture illustrates various stages of how salmon grow and reproduce
Overall, it is clear that life cycle of salmon consists of three habitats, beginning with salmon spawning in river and ending with salmon moving from ocean back to river.
In the first stage, salmon spawn in the river, producing incubation. After that, baby salmon start to emerge from these eggs and are kept and bred by the adult ones in freshwater areas. Once the baby salmon have been older, they then move to the estuary area and rear there before ready to transition to the ocean.
In the following stage, salmon mitigate to the ocean and travel to their rearing areas. In these areas, they continue to develop and mature for a period. In the last stage, once they have reach an adequate size, salmon undergo another migration, and back to the spawning areas in rivers. The whole cycle is then ready to start again
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... stages of how salmon grow and reproduce Overall, it is clear that life cycle of ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to the ocean. In the following stage, salmon mitigate to the ocean and travel ...
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Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nue to develop and mature for a period. In the last stage, once they have reach an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77564102564 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1334022887 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.5976748685 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.125 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225345612586 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910282268146 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734064408806 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144312202442 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714651680402 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.