The diagram shows the life cycle of silkworm and stages in the production of silk cloth.
The given diagrams highlight the growth of silkworm through distinct stages and steps involved in production of silk cloth. It is clear and coherent representation.
The first flow diagram tells the life cycle of silkworm; from eggs to a fully matured moth. whereas, second representation depicts the 6 steps for production of silk cloth.
It can be seen that, mother moth Lays eggs on a Mulberry leaf, within 10 days, silliworm larva hatched out of eggs, and started consuming Mulberry leaves as food. Later on, within a period of 4 to 6 weeks; Larva get covered with Silk thread which then, transformed to cacoon in net 3-8 days. Afterwards, cacoon get converted into adult moth in a period of 16 days.
For silk production, cocoon is selected, boiled in water to remove impurities, which help to elasten the thread; the technique involved is referred as unwinding. During unwinding the length of thread increased up to 300-900m, become stretchable. Afterwards, either cocoon is twisted and dyed or first woven then after, coloured to make usable products of silk like clothes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...orm; from eggs to a fully matured moth. whereas, second representation depicts the 6 st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08379888268 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7472177095 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670391061453 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8313362175 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280954088263 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101124198059 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126958114497 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200292757602 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152056021246 0.0819641961636 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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