The given diagrams represent the cycle of silkworm life as well as the process of silk production.
To complete a life cycle of a silkworm,it takes 4 steps. Firstly, the silkworm lays eggs on leaf. After 10 days, larva comes out from egg and uses mulberry leaf as food. Then, 4-6 weeks later, silk thread is made from larva. Finally, it takes 3-8 days to turn into cocoon before it moves to moth in next 16 days.
Manufacturing cloth from silk is also 4 step process. At the first stage, cocoon is selected to boil in water. Next, the thread is unwind in 300-900m before twisting with dye. The dye is used for both twisting and weaving. After twisting the thread, the final step is weave and then it is moved to dye. By these steps, silk cloth is produced from selecting cocoon and boiling it with water.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , it
... To complete a life cycle of a silkworm,it takes 4 steps. Firstly, the silkworm l...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of a silkworm,it takes 4 steps. Firstly, the silkworm lays eggs on leaf. After 10...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gg and uses mulberry leaf as food. Then, 4-6 weeks later, silk thread is made fro...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...silk thread is made from larva. Finally, it takes 3-8 days to turn into cocoon be...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'unwound'.
Suggestion: unwound
...d to boil in water. Next, the thread is unwind in 300-900m before twisting with dye. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 663.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47972972973 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2242253927 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628378378378 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 187.2 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.4682251213 43.030603864 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.25 112.824112599 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3333333333 22.9334400587 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240560513513 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890640787433 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10802916125 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198575156572 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115199472741 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 13.2329268293 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 61.2550243902 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.3012195122 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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