The diagram depicts how sugar is manufactured from sugar cane.
Overall, there are seven distinct stages contributing to the production of sugar, beginning with the growing process of sugar canes which takes merely 12 to 18 months on average, and ending with processed sugar being dried and cooled.
First and foremost, sugar canes are grown on fields for at least one year to reach their suitable heights. When it is highly probable to be harvested, workers will ensure these sugar canes will be cut off with the help of cutting tools and the involvement of machines. Having been collected, those canes will then go through the crushing machines, which can help with juice suppression.
The process then continues with the purification of juice through limestone filters before reaching the stage of evaporation. At this stage, the evaporator will ensure the sugary juice becoming syrup under a high level of heat. Chronologically, since sugar crystals need to be separated from syrup, this liquid will be centrifuged. Coming to the last stage is the crystals being dried and cooled, and the result is sugar being made.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, then, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14130434783 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61156997447 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614130434783 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2211538338 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.111111111 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204229470352 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103752517589 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106489074614 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182194704156 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113916263651 0.0819641961636 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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