Some people think the most important thing about being rich is that it gives a person an opportunity to help other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s world, it is evident that there has been a notion forming up which indicates that giving a hand to people who are in need is of pivotal importance for the wealthy. From my personal perspective, I somewhat agree with this ongoing trend, however, there are still some disagreements that will be further discussed in this essay.
On the one hand, the upper class, such as those running for the presidency can indeed use their tremendous amount of money to make a significant impact on the lives of cash-trapped individuals. One prominent justification for this is the former president Donald Trump, who used his money and prosperity to “make America great again”. Evidently, during his presidency, he had stabilized and cultivated the economic growth of the United State which in turn, created many job opportunities for people of this developed nation. Another reason why being rich is synonymous with having the ability to help the needy is that they can donate a large sum of money to non-governmental organizations for charity. Some of the names worth mentioning are Bill Gates and Elon Musk. They have donated a significant amount of networth for those who are in need and this could change people’s lives for the better.
On the other hand, the prosperous are not completely in charge of donating to others. A reason for this is that there are still a number of individuals who have the ability to make their life less deteriorating and become better by working hard but instead, they choose to do nothing. Then again, the rich may also want to expand their businesses so the money they have might go into this developing process.
To recapitulate, I partly disagree with the discussion about whether the most significant task of wealthy individuals is to help other people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 702, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...governmental organizations for charity. Some of the names worth mentioning are Bill Gates a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, then, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97350993377 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8323319533 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596026490066 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.715135051 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.166666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156052322084 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560600029662 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440300431706 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10541616689 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470244836897 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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