The diagram depicts how bananas are grown before being put out on marketplaces like supermarkets for further consumption.
Overall, there are seven distinct stages contributing to the pre-commercialization of bananas, starting with the growing state and ending with the customers’ buying procedure.
First of all, the growth of bananas takes up from negligibly nine months to a year, of which the weather conditions needed to cultivate the growth are frequent rains and the temperature clustered between 25-30 Celcius degrees. The following stage is worker will be chopping those bananas off when the trees have fully grown and the fruits are still green. Chronologically, those picked bananas will be selectively chosen, and only good ones are kept while the bad ones will be thrown away.
Courtesy of the distance between countries, ships are needed to export the bananas from nation to nation. While being transported on ships, this type of fruit will be stored in fridges at 13.3 Celcius degrees to ensure quality. After being imported, they will then be kept in special rooms to rest. When bananas have turned yellow, they will be delivered on trucks to supermarkets where customers will buy them for eating or gifting purposes.
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- The plans show an office in a university in 2005 and the same office now 79
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, still, then, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29797979798 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85753719567 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7266235288 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.555555556 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145241198899 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636829513039 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685364736834 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103677615611 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734136541451 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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