The diagram shows the process of making coffee.
The given diagram details the step by step procedure of manufacturing coffee. The entire process consists of 10 stages as discussed below.
Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the whole process undergoes different phases: picking, drying, roasting, cooling, freezing, and grinding before storing in jars to be ready to get transported.
According to the given illustration, first of all, the harvested beans are picked up to get dried properly under the sun. Then, the roasting process takes place on the dried beans before passing to the next stage of cooling at a rapid rate. once cooled, the beans are crushed smoothly by passing through a grinder.
In the later stages, hot water is poured on the crushed coffee beans to get simmered for some time followed by the straining mechanism. Thereafter, the strained mixture is cooled by transferring into a freezer. From this step, the grinding procedure is carried on once again on the liquid which has been cooled in the previous stage. Next, the crushed mixture is kept into a Vaccum machine to evaporate the excess water. In the end, the resulting dried mixture is packed into the desired jars to be sold in the market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Once
... next stage of cooling at a rapid rate. once cooled, the beans are crushed smoothly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0447761194 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59616653762 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606965174129 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8323251411 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1818181818 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0912731017612 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312006508012 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357051885391 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593903389338 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394420512827 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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