The picture describes the detailed process of how to recycle an old newspaper and devise a paper. It can be clearly seen that the process includes nine stages each has its own characteristics.
Firstly, the newspaper is scratched into small pieces in the container. Then 250ml of water should be supplemented before leaving it for an hour to make soft and smooth which is compatible to be recycled. After an hour the mixture is mixed by an equipment named electric mixer for 45 seconds in order to make a combination even smaller. Thereupon, blend is put above a tray with 100 ml water and there should be hand effort to squash it. The sixth step is to put a mesh under the combination to filter the exceed liquor. TO strengthen and smoothen the paper we have to use a rolling pin which is dedicated to make it even. Then there the last stage, in this stage rolled paper is stayed in the sun for 24 hours to be drought and flatten.
In conclusion, the process is not necessarily a difficult to do, so, everyone should try the recycling process to reduse the number of endangered trees.
- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 84
- the plans below show a public park when it was first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- The table shows the figure for imprisonment in thousands in five countries between 1930 and 1980. 89
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'handed'?
Suggestion: handed
...y with 100 ml water and there should be hand effort to squash it. The sixth step is ...
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Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... a mesh under the combination to filter the exceed liquor. TO strengthen and smoothen the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64846540716 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617346938776 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5550419231 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.6 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134490034074 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051550033883 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488978251718 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975339337948 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199122333062 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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