The map describes "Grand Park" established in 1920 in Arnold avenue, compared to current facilities and view of this park.
In 1920, the park was very simply organized, it had 2 entrances in the north an south of it and there were seats next to the each entrance. Moreover, rose gardens are situated in the two side of the north entrance and left of the south one. The main features of the park were fountain and stage for musicians located in the park center. There some places of interests were built such as glass house. Intriguingly, pond for water plants was situated in the north east of the park.
Today, it looks far more moderned with lots of amusement facilities. Rose gardens are replaced in the center, surrounded with seats, whereas one of them is remained its previous location. The major characteristic of the reconstruct is that the amphitheatre is built instead of a stage for musicians and water feature is constructed. Besides, a number of local facilities like cafe, children's play area and underground park is located.
- Some people believe that media should be allowed to publish information about the private lives of famous people Others say that everybody has a right to privacy and this practice must be controlled or even stopped Discuss both views 87
- the plans below show a public park when it was first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems 78
- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant. 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...anized, it had 2 entrances in the north an south of it and there were seats next t...
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Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s location. The major characteristic of the reconstruct is that the amphitheatre is built inste...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look, moreover, so, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93258426966 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77402965015 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612359550562 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5601161101 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182138911661 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678789800117 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648359592853 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117228658491 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411167875075 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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