The diagram shows the production of circuit boards

the given picture illustrates how to produce a circuit board.

Overall, the process-produced circuit board goes through many stages from preparing materials to delivering products.

The first stage of all processes is to deliver circuit board materials. Next, these things are cut and sprayed with a fire retardant. Then they are fully cleaned before being transferred into automatic IC attachment and soldering. the most important step of the process is to test the products in both visual inspection and quality. After experiencing the control testing step, chips from rejected boards are thrown away, whilst circuit boards get standard kept to go the next step. standard chips are finally tested and packaged if they don't get any errors. in contrast, mistaken chips go back automatic IC attachment and soldering step and continue to handle similar steps. last but not least, the mass number of circuit-board delivered to factories and it is ready for selling to the customer.

Votes
Average: 7.9 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the given picture illustrates how to produc...
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Suggestion: The
... automatic IC attachment and soldering. the most important step of the process is t...
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Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'kept going', 'kept gonna'.
Suggestion: kept going; kept gonna
...way, whilst circuit boards get standard kept to go the next step. standard chips are final...
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Suggestion: Standard
... get standard kept to go the next step. standard chips are finally tested and packaged i...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...are finally tested and packaged if they dont get any errors. in contrast, mistaken c...
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Suggestion: In
...d packaged if they dont get any errors. in contrast, mistaken chips go back automa...
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Suggestion: Last
...p and continue to handle similar steps. last but not least, the mass number of circu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, then, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32692307692 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76913431693 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698717948718 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8605455797 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233485554283 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930189307001 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824101670815 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175567266348 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271706697699 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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