The diagram shows production of sugar by a German company for supermarkets and restaurants
The given diagram elucidates the production process of sugar which is carried out by a German company in detail stages. In general, it can be seen that there are 8 required steps beginning with harvesting sugarcane in the tropical regions and finishing with transporting the outcomes to supermarkets and restaurants.
In the initial stage, the sugarcane plants are harvested which happens in tropical countries. Secondly, by running the crusher, juice is collected in a standard procedure. In the subsequent step, partial filtration is used to collect raw sugar. After that, raw sugar is delivered to Germany. Before performs the crystallization process, the raw sugar are melt and filtered to complete the purification. In the following stage, sugar crystals are dried before packaged. In the end of this process, packages of sugar crystal are transported to displayed on supermarket and restaurants for sales. By following this process, natural sugar are provided to the customers for use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43225806452 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0363321978 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2006218857 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281126852109 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973843036097 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955704747563 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204140863994 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214140082131 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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