Given is the diagram depicting how to make Fish pie. Perceptibly, this is a linear process with multiple steps, which commences from delivering potatoes, Fresh salmon to the factory and ends with delivering to store.
The process initiates when potatoes are delivered up to one month which are sent by trucks to the factory. thenceforth, potatoes are cleaned before they are peeled. Following that, it is put into the hot water to boil the potatoes. After that, the potatoes are salvaged, placed potatoes in the tray to chill it and then warp up all of them. At the same time, Fresh salmon is delivered 12 hours or less to ensure freshness of salmon. The second stage is that squeeze the lemon juice and sprinkle the salt on the salmon. It, after that, is putted in the oven to steam. Thereafter, salmon is taken out the oven and removed skin and bones. Following that, the salmon is inspected one more time to make sure it safety. Subsequently, it condiments namely peas, sauce are added. The penultimate then, the potatoes are included with the salmon and warped up. Finally, Fish pie is freezed before delivered it into the store.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thenceforth
...hich are sent by trucks to the factory. thenceforth, potatoes are cleaned before they are p...
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Line 2, column 397, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
..., Fresh salmon is delivered 12 hours or less to ensure freshness of salmon. The seco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7614213198 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4647897973 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578680203046 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3195797225 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.0714285714 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0493909135909 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234879826834 0.103423049105 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559262228407 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560169442815 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316801438623 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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