The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is the diagram delineating the progress of frozen fish pies.
It is perceptible that this is a linear process with multiple steps, which commences with 2 happens in parallel are delivery potatoes and salmon but the common end of both processes is towards storing/dispatching the frozen fish pies.
The process to produce fish pie to users is carried out by 2 main stages and transpires simultaneously. About the potatoes stage, it initiates when potatoes are delivered up to one month in advance to the factory where it can be cleaned before processed. Following that, one of the outer layers of the potato was peeled off while the rest was then cut into small pieces. After that, each piece of potato is cooked until it is soft enough, the next thing is to chill it, which plays an important role in determining the deliciousness of the potato later before going to store steps.
At that moment, the pieces of salmon were shipped within 1 month at the latest to keep the freshness of the pieces. In the subsequent step, the freshness of the fish is extremely important, so squeeze lemỏn and sprinkle salt are so necessary before being cook in the steam oven. After that, bones and skins are removed by the meticulousness and precision to transfer to inspection. Peas, sauce are the ingredients in the process; In addition, potato chips made from the first stages are used as an ingredient to make these fish pies. And in the end, it is wrapped and Freeze to prepare to be launched in the market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 7.0 314% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 263.0 196.424390244 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73384030418 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71458392138 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 106.607317073 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577946768061 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8495256408 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.181818182 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0929985032072 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390580666689 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475817648067 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718390087047 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436408466939 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.