Given is the diagram delineating the process of fish pie.
It is perceptible that this is a linear process with multiple steps, which commences with delivering potatoes and fresh salmon and ends with storing or dispatching the products.
The process initiates when potatoes are delivered up to one month to the place for processing. Therefore, potatoes are cleaned by modern equipment of the factory to be peeled and cut into the pot. After that, they are boiled and chilled to store for later cleaning fresh salmon. At the same time, salmon fish are delivered 12 hours or less to the factory for processing with potatoes. In the next step, fish is processed with lemon juice and salt to reduce the fishy taste when used for the next purpose. In the subsequent step, they are put into a steam oven to be cooked and skins and bones are removed by factory workers. Quality inspectors check them after being refreshed through the above stages. Following that, salmon is sent to be combined with peas and a sauce prepared by the staff to create a distinctive aroma. On the other hand, salmon mixed with potatoes has been stocked by experienced staff to prepare for the most important step. Then, they are carefully packed into crates to be frozen in the refrigerator at the right temperature for the best product. The process ends up when they are kept in perfect condition to be sent to customers who need them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... store for later cleaning fresh salmon. At the same time, salmon fish are delive...
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Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
..., salmon fish are delivered 12 hours or less to the factory for processing with pota...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75918367347 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47501803745 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563265306122 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.058054777 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6923076923 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.034729262435 0.215688989381 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0190926321091 0.103423049105 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428891789805 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603893461346 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720860495536 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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