The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001

Essay topics:

The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001.

The given maps illustrate variations that took place in Felixstone in the UK from 1967 to 2001.

Generally, in the most parts, Felixstone witnessed noticeable changes to have more entertainment and tourism services. Besides, although Felixstone kept some of its old spots, becoming a tourist attraction lead to its abandoning all of the fishing facilities.

In the Northeastern part, the agricultural area was converted into a service complex containing a swimming pool, two tennis courts and a hotel. Additionally, on the high street, inspite the remaining of a linear array of shop and the street itself, the shops on the right was demolished to build new apartments. In spite of these major changes, the golf course stayed unchanged over 34 years.

Considering the South side of Felixstone, in the East, there was a conversion of all the fishery infrastructures like the marina and the fish market into two beaches, the private and the public one. Moreover, while the cafe experienced no changes, the old hotel in the Southwest was replaced by a new hotel and a car park. Finally, a construction of wind turbines was carried out despite the stability of natural places.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...urist attraction lead to its abandoning all of the fishing facilities. In the Northeast...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, moreover, so, while, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14507772021 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99503378756 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652849740933 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.371049053 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104645794717 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447168449961 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081599559317 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878544482257 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103961415401 0.0819641961636 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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