The first picture delineates detailed design of a wave-energy machine, whereas the second pictures depicts how placing of the machine has significantly impacts the energy output.
Overall, a wave-energy machine produces electricity using waves created by vacillating water . Location plays very pivotal role in producing electricity, where distance from the shore is directly proportional to the productivity of the device.
A wave-energy machine, which designed to produce electricity, is mainly comprised of an electricity generator, an upper chamber, and a lower chamber.The machine is placed in such a way that wave is directed towards the lower chamber of the machine, creating air bubbles which are later fed into upper chamber through holes. Also, air is pumped into upper chamber to run the turbine, which is connected to the electricity generator.
Based on the requirement, two types of installation is preferred, where in first type, supremely productive machine with immense cost of installation, and in the second type, reduced productivity with inexpensive installation expenditure.
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features an 73
- The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- Some organization believe that their employees should dress smartly Others value quality of work above appearance Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or 89
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- The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries Cambridge 6 test 1 task 1 91
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...using waves created by vacillating water . Location plays very pivotal role in pro...
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Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: ENTIRELY_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'mainly composed of'?
Suggestion: mainly composed of
...ich designed to produce electricity, is mainly comprised of an electricity generator, an upper cham...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
..., an upper chamber, and a lower chamber.The machine is placed in such a way that wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77914110429 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19700651925 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625766871166 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.45097560976 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.1152464587 43.030603864 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.0 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157682899931 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798445119421 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521168619043 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976623326933 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427644083007 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.69 61.2550243902 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 10.3012195122 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.54 11.4140731707 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.06136585366 135% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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