The diagrams below show the life cycle of a cotton T shirt Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The given process illustrates the different stages (Production, Consumption, Disposal) through which a cotton t-shirt goes through.

Overall, it can be observed that it is a time-consuming process and involves human intervention to complete the entire cycle of the cotton t-shirt.

To begin with, the cotton that is harvested is picked by a cotton picker. Then, it is converted into the bales which are transported to the manufactures by lorry. Next, these bales are threaded and weaved into a piece of fabric. The fabric must be treated for colour before it is ready to ship. After colouring, it is sent for cutting and sewing. T-shirts which are made from the fabric are propelled towards packaging.

Thereafter, those packages are dispatched to shops where it is bought by a consumer. The consumer wears those t-shirts. After its usage, they throw in the trash bin. However, the best way of disposal is recycling.

Votes
Average: 8.1 (2 votes)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15894039735 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7999072707 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629139072848 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2800247831 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.9166666667 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5833333333 22.9334400587 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100915024458 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295952476056 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384338767133 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610049743207 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291584046473 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.76 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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