The diagrams below show the life cycle of a cotton T-shirt.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given illustration provides information abot the whole process of turning harvested cotton into a T- shirt.
The process starts when the cotton is harvested by cotton picker. Afterward, the harvested cotton is pressed into bales and shipped to the manufactories by trucks. Those bales of cotton are threaded and weaved so as to become fabrics. Because fabrics have no color so that they are designed and dyed in the next steps. Finally, the cloth is completed into a T-shirt.
The finished cotton T-shirts are packaged and sent to the fashion shops. Those products are bought and used by the consumer, which lead to the final stage of the process - disposal stage. The cotton T-shirts can be burned or dumped into trash but the best way is recycling those one.
Overall, the cycle of a simple cotton T-shirt has three major stages which are production, consumption and disposal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...bales of cotton are threaded and weaved so as to become fabrics. Because fabrics have no...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97972972973 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52860754816 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.1900878772 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.7 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150665308273 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654859603116 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418729088437 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102519061194 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164049593717 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.