Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both the views and give our opinion.
Sharing information leads to awareness. It brings quality, ameliorates productivity, and boosts team spirit. However, a group of people believes that some information needs to be kept in discreet. I would like to present my views in this essay in the following paragraphs.
Someone has rightly said, “Power is gained by sharing knowledge and not by hoarding it.” The more we share the better we become. For instance, an academic related information shared by teachers to students, can enhance the teaching and learning techniques. Eventually, the students become more confident and do well. The same applies to other fields too. Scientific Research based information such as Invention of any drug, can help doctors to give medical aid to their patients. Similarly, Information associated to business can guide the investors about the profit and loss of the same.
Nevertheless, there are oodles of reasons for not publicizing some segment of data. It is mandatory to keep in concealment. To illustrate, information that can be threat to a country or can hamper the progress of economy needs to keep confidential. Army officials have to keep the information guarded of their plans to deal with the terrorist activities. Similarly, in academic field, question paper setters do not have to disclose the questions they have asked in the examination as this will put the evaluation system in doldrums. In the same way, some secrets of business are necessary to keep under the carpet to avoid any gains to a competitor.
To sum up, even though, sharing of knowledge brings prosperity, improves efficiency, and lift morale but there are some indispensable facts that requires to be in closet for smooth functioning.
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- The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 67
- Some people think spending on arts is a waste of money rather than a budget should be diverted to other public services. Do you agree or disagree? 84
- Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages? 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, similarly, so, well, for instance, such as, to sum up, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26811594203 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01262832533 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61231884058 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3561396881 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5294117647 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287398858739 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797865389944 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687613330211 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157798833539 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588841697587 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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