The given process illustrates the journey of cotton t-shirts that passes through different stages such as production, consumption, and disposal.
Overall, it is a time-consuming and complex process. The intervention of human is indispensable for the completion of the entire cycle of cotton t-shirts.
To begin with, the cotton is harvested on a large scale and is picked by a cotton picker. Then, it is sent to a place for the conversion into the bales. After that, those bales are transported by lorry to the manufactures for the next stage. Later, those bales are threaded and weaved into a piece of fabric before getting transformed into a finished product. Since the fabric is colourless, the treatment of colour is a prerequisite before designing. After the colouring of fabric, the same is pushed for cutting and sewing. Once they are turned to the finished products, they are moved towards packaging according to the demand of a seller.
At last, those packages are dispatched to a shop for consumption. The consumers buy those t-shirts as per their choice and wear them. After their usage, they are directed towards disposal in different forms. Although there are varied ways of disposal, the best way is recycling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91414141414 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82736727605 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565656565657 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.676886589 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8461538462 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0838188640431 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0257701099568 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350393359783 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056000841056 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278474353716 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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