The given process illustrates the different stages such as Production, Consumption, and Disposal through which a cotton t-shirt goes through.
Overall, it can be observed that it is a time-consuming and complex process that involves human intervention to complete the entire cycle of the cotton t-shirt.
To begin with, the cotton that is harvested on a large scale is picked by a cotton picker. Then, it is sent to a place where it is converted into the bales. Those bales are transported to the manufactures for the next stage by lorry. Next, these bales are threaded and weaved into a piece of fabric before it is forwarded to a finished product. The fabric is colourless, so it is a prerequisite to be treated for colour before it is designed. After colouring, it is sent for cutting and sewing. T-shirts which are made from the fabric are propelled towards packaging.
Thereafter, those packages are dispatched to shops where it is bought by a consumer. The consumer wears those t-shirts. After its usage, they throw in the trash bin. However, the best way of disposal is recycling.
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of a cotton T-shirt.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- prevention is better than cure 11
- Some people think spending on arts is a waste of money rather than a budget should be diverted to other public services. Do you agree or disagree? 78
- movie budget 11
- PIE CHART ON DIFFERENT EXPENDITURES ON MOVIE 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... stages such as Production, Consumption, and Disposal through which a cotton t-sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96216216216 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8528048044 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583783783784 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2058545725 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6153846154 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101925573969 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297827898792 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352015707334 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615459689466 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027170721777 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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