The diagrams represent the birth of a silk worm and the stages in creation of silk cloth. They are shown together because of the inter connection between the two processes, that is caused due to the dependence of man on one insect for a piece of silk fabric.
Overall, it is clear the natural process is more time consuming in comparison with the artificial one. It takes over a month and half for the egg to manifest into a cocoon, while a cocoon can be transformed into thread rather instantaneously.
Initially, the moth lays its eggs, these hatch and become larvae. The gestation period for this is about ten days. Afterwards, the larvae feed on mulberry leaves for about two to three fortnights. They fatten up and develop an outer cover , this is possibly the source of silk. Similar, to a tortoise with an outer cover, and popping heads, the larvae are wrapped in this silk thread. But this is not the case forever, as they get completely engulfed by this thread within three to eight days.
Now no longer a mobile creature, the young ones morph into a shell like thing. This is usually referred to as the 'cocoon phase'. It stays so for about sixteen days before transitioning to a full grown moth. Of all the forms of the worm, this phase is quintessential for producing silk thread.
Rest of silk production is rather simple,all that happens is picking the right sized cocoon, boiling it in water till it reaches the prescribed temperature and unwinding the thread. Its length is dependent upon the size of its source ranging from three hundred to nine hundred metres. After being so extracted, it is twisted and turned for gaining some girth. Later on , it is dyed and woven for making silk garments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hey fatten up and develop an outer cover , this is possibly the source of silk. Si...
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Line 9, column 41, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , all
...Rest of silk production is rather simple,all that happens is picking the right sized...
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Line 9, column 369, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... turned for gaining some girth. Later on , it is dyed and woven for making silk ga...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 965.302439024 147% => OK
No of words: 301.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72093023256 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54244539392 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 106.607317073 168% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594684385382 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 1.53170731707 849% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0517460751 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9444444444 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10669889194 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365370774386 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750107822364 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065261130734 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717918804992 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 40.7170731707 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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