Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
What extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many people hold the view that music is able to link people in various cultures, various ranges of age together. In my opinion, while people from different culture can connect together through music, I believe that the differences in age are not easy to clear by music.
To begin with, connection of citizens in different countries can be proved by the immigration of foreign songs to other countries. When a foreign song is accepted in other countries and cultures, it means that people in these nations have the same feeling and love. In addition, based on the development of technology such as social networks and internet, supporters around the world can communicate together whenever their idol introduces a new song. For example, fan clubs of famous singer such as Lady Gaga or Big Bang music band spread over the world. Whenever they introduce a new song, the whole fan club listen and express feelings together in spite of differences in language and nationality. Therefore, music plays a key role to connect human over the world.
In contrast, people in different ranges of age are difficultly linked together by music. Because artistic trends, especially musical trend, always alter over time, citizens in a particular period love songs in that time only. Most of them reject to accept musical works from the age before and after. For instance, while almost senior citizens in Vietnam like cai luong which is popular in the years 1970s to 1990s, the young generation is keen on electronic digital music. Accordingly, music is not an effective way to combine people from different ages.
In conclusion, although ability to link people from various cultures of music can be denied, I think that it is challenging for music to connect generations together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03071672355 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6315033423 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576791808874 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9153057135 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264126773789 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104708960438 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925655828291 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185024124392 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086237731994 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.