The diagram illustrates the life cycle of salmon. In general, there are 3 periods of evolution, from being the fry to smolt and finally adult salmon with the durations of development increases in each stage.
For the first period, it takes place at upper river with slow moving of current and just needs only about 5-6 months for salmon eggs to evolve to fry having the size of 3-8 cm. The eggs mix up with small stones and exist under the reeds until they hatch. By the next 4 years, fry swims to lower river, which means in fast moving current to continually enlarge their body to 12-15 cm and become smolt. At the last procedure of maturity, it takes the longest time to grow (approximately 5 years) in open sea. This kind of fish will have the most significant change compared to above 2 periods which makes a leap to 70-76 cm in length to be adult salmon for this stage and lives with this size for the rest of their lives.
- 5 The chart below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mai 73
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- in their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some ways Why is this Do you think this is a positive or negative development 56
- The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features a 84
- The chart below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category or exports in 2016 compared with 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, in general, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36416184971 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17910642115 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653179190751 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2935651053 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0781242343544 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546386728138 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917163392818 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863879770234 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484738507116 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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