It is obligatory that students at the university must join some outdoor activities to graduate, but there has recently been high schools require the same regulation for their pupils. There are arguments if this is necessary or too much for these children.
Once to discuss about is benefits the voluntary works bring to us. People must have had sympathetic feelings on the pain and difficulties of others to determine to spend their time helping with non-profit. This develops their characteristics in a very positive direction and improve volunteers' soft skills, either. By doing free work every day, students can have a chance to expose to many people that they have not known before. As a result, it not only helps to expand the social relationships, but the communication skills could be able to evolve drastically.
So the problem is with the above advantages, should voluntary work be available to high school students? This is a completely different matter which depends on perspective of individuals. In case students do not really carry out it by heart, there is no use wasting their time in stuff they just do with negligence but to do homework instead. In contrast, pupils who seem to be in this field tend to voluntarily experience these work with the hope and honor of being more mature themselves plus pulling people who need help out of trouble as much as possible. And schools have to consider carefully about the rate of volunteers in order to make appropriate decision. For me, it it the best to limit the level of obligation, they can take outdoor activities into account to give students bonus points, not a requirement to graduate.
In conclusion, it can be controversial to follow one side and ignore another of suggestions since this involves in general society benefit. However, this work should be seen as a motivation rather than a pressure put on students.
- 2 A person s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions Old fashioned values such as honour kindness and trust no longer seem important To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion Give reasons for y 95
- The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last 40 years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison 84
- 5 The chart below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mai
- More and more fathers are taking a break from their careers so that they can stay home and take care of their children while their wives work This is better for the family than having both parents work full time To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them the sense of cooperation not competition 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cessary or too much for these children. Once to discuss about is benefits the volunt...
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Line 3, column 676, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
...r to make appropriate decision. For me, it it the best to limit the level of obligati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, in conclusion, in contrast, in general, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95268138801 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8647806071 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608832807571 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.782022183 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235707741044 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736177369837 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486833751294 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129387067025 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540073710161 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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