Concrete plays an important role in construction nowadays. The diagrams provided the information that how to produce cement and that how to use cement for concrete.
To begin with, limestone and clay fall down together, after passing through crushers, they become pounds. Then put the pounds into a mixer and heat them in rotating heater with high temperature. By using a grinder, cement can be packaged into bags. The next step is to produce concrete. During this process,15% of cement, 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel are mixed up in the equipment whose name is 'concrete mixer'. The machine moves in circles to mill and make them together.
It is clear from the diagrams that three procedures, which are crushing, heating, and mixture, are crucial during the whole process. Overall, cement is made from limestone and clay and after which it becomes the raw material for concrete.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... During this process,15% of cement, 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96688741722 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51552784841 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655629139073 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0357382239 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263780715932 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094487301249 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111207469098 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188186412829 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10412217286 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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