The two diagrams illustrate the cement-making process and then how this cement is used for concrete production. We can see that cement manufacturing involves some complex processes and concrete production is made using a concrete mixer.
The first diagram shows that for getting salmon is used raw materials such as Limestone and clay. They both are crushed in a Crusher. Then the received powder passes through a mixer. After that is heated in a rotating heater tube where the powder passes into the form of a place. this material is grinded on a grinder machine to finally produce the cement. The last stage he is a packing the cement into the bags and marketed for sale.
Meanwhile the second diagram presents how cement can be used to produce concrete. This process is simpler than cement production; concrete is a mixture of 15% cement, 10% water, 25% sand and 50% small stones which a named as gravel. The all four elements are rotated in a huge mixer.
In general, the steps of making cement are more complicated and they require different equipment whereas concrete production demands the mixing of components in the right proportion in a simplier machine.
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- The graph below shows in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK 78
- The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution To what extent do you agree or disagree 87
- Young people enjoy life more than older people do. 53
- The graph below shows in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to more than technology in homes in the UK
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...received powder passes through a mixer. After that is heated in a rotating heater tub...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 280, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...powder passes into the form of a place. this material is grinded on a grinder machin...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...t into the bags and marketed for sale. Meanwhile the second diagram presents how cement ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, then, whereas, while, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92893401015 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60414501997 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604060913706 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.350180693 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9166666667 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381106275079 0.215688989381 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12399010858 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112567232349 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22314031939 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900879245184 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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