Given are two diagrams highlighting the machinery employed in the production of concrete from cement for putting up building.
Overall, it is clearly evident that, in order to produce cement, there are 5 steps involved. On the contrary, production of concrete entails virtually a one-step approach.
With regards to how cement is produced; firstly, clay and limestone as raw materials are made into powder through a crusher. The powder then passes through a mixer, before it moves round in a rotating heater. This stage is aided by a source of flame. Following this, the resultant product goes through a grinder, before cement is attained. In the last part, cement is then packed in various bags to be used.
Moving to the manufacture of concrete, 15% of cement, a tenth of water are added unto a quarter of sand and half of small stones (gravels). They are then collected in a concrete mixer to whirl around to make concrete.
- The diagram below shows the steps in the process of manufacturing yogurt 84
- The tables below show people s reasons for giving up smoking and when they intend to give up summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant 79
- The pie charts below show the result of a survey of children’s activities. Thefirst chart shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in,whereas the second chart shows the activities in which the girls participate. 84
- Some countries encourage teenagers to have a part time job to see it is a good thing, while others disagree.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 78
- The line graph below in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012 64
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, so, then, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91139240506 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63342862495 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658227848101 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0634994254 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222363194468 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782405116088 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448560257084 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126019935525 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291538893944 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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