The bar chart offers a glimpse of how various age groups of Australian males and females who frequently engage in workout by 2010.
It can clearly be seen in the graph that Australian females had a tendency to generally more interested in physical activity than Australian male. For instance, the middle category of age (35 to 44) indicates that the overwhelming majority of people doing exercise were females about 52,5 percent compared only to 39,5 percent of males
In comparison, in the first age group (from 15 to 24) doing exercise proved to be more fruitful for males at a young age as an overall percentage grew in contrast to females and reach the most striking proportion in their span of life by 52,8 percent whereas females was roughly 5 percent marginally lower.
Not long after that, unfortunately for males, in the two next phases, particularly aged at 35 and 44, the participation in regular physical exercise is no longer a strong concern and was passed for the most passive group as it touched the bottom by 39,5%. Nonetheless, from aged 45 onwards the figures were constantly improved, but not as numerous as it was initially.
On the contrary, Women aged from 25 to 64 years old had back-to-back increases and were among the most bodily active groups when they reached their peak by 53,3 percent in the middle age. Interestingly, the percentages of people in the last category of age to involve in exercising were remarkably similar for both genders, at approximately 47 percent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nonetheless, so, whereas, for instance, in contrast, in contrast to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88235294118 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81615594969 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 106.607317073 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592156862745 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.529059623 43.030603864 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.857142857 112.824112599 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4285714286 22.9334400587 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2857142857 5.23603664747 273% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0306301036579 0.215688989381 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0147515403114 0.103423049105 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0131705083078 0.0843802449381 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0199625011366 0.15604864568 13% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00637935025024 0.0819641961636 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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