The given pictures illustrate the procedure of forming cement and how it is applied to create concrete with suitable instruments and components. Generally, producing cement is a rather sophisticated and multiple - step process involving various 5 phases, whereas concrete production is not complicated like that as it has an only step which is mixing.
First and foremost, the main essential materials for cement production are limestone and clay which are crushed to totally metamorphose into power. Then, it is placed in a mixer in order to combine and passed through a cylindrical rotating heater with the aim at heating in a significant amount of time. Until this heating stage is accomplished, the resulting mixture is finely ground before it completely converted into cement. Eventually, the finished cement is packaged in large bags ready for purchasing.
In comparison, the technique of concrete manufacturing was more simplified with a concrete mixer which is applied for mixing with the four ingredients that their proportions need to be adhered. The cement in needed (15%), water (10%), sand a quarter and gravel (small granules of stone) are exactly a half. These are all poured into the concrete mixer in order to combine them and ultimately makes up concrete
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24630541872 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92618318949 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630541871921 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6562389032 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204391887924 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784807407129 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323702599641 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130030026049 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00906752981817 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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