The picture illustrates the improvements in the cooking equipment. As it is shown, there are three stages in the process from the simplest form to a piece of sophisticated equipment.
In its initial form, the cooking equipment had a very simple heat source. It stands on three pieces of stones with grasses to be used as fuel for its fire. As for the second stage, the heat source is surrounded by a shield made out of clay. The function of this clay shield is to minimize heat loss.
The final stage of the cooking equipment development is a lot more complex. The heat source is separated into two sections, the upper and the bottom. The latter is made of metal with a door that enables the cycle of air and ash. Both sections are connected with a grate for charcoal to be put on. The purpose of its holes is to be an access for air to enter and for excess ash to fall. The upper section is completed with a heat-resistant clay lining, a handle, and three pieces of triangular-shaped support for pot.
- The diagrams below show the stages in the development of simple cooking equipment 69
- The graph below gives information about cinema attendance in Australia between 1990 and the present, with projections to 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where r 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ment development is a lot more complex. The heat source is separated into two secti...
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...two sections, the upper and the bottom. The latter is made of metal with a door tha...
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Line 7, column 332, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...t on. The purpose of its holes is to be an access for air to enter and for excess ash to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51086956522 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67355953831 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.8256287556 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.1666666667 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141887471632 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615418957291 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823083988553 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118800936875 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662391248326 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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