The diagrams illustrate the design of a single and double room study area.
The diagram compares between the maps of single and double room study area.
Overall, the rent has a significant difference between two kinds of room . Besides, there are two beds, two bookshelves, two cupboards in the double room study area, while the single room has one for each furnitures.
While the both of rooms have a similar length at 6 metres, the width of the single room is smaller that of the double room, at 2.5 metres and 4 metres, respectively. Additionally, a thin wall is built to separate the double room into two smaller spaces in which has one study desk, one bed and one cupboard for each compared to only one in whole the single room for each kinds of furnitures.
In addition, both of the room type have a bathroom and a kitchen at the similar position. While there are two window in the right of the double room and a table inside the room, the single one has no any tables or windows.
- The line graph shows the number of trips to other countries by UK residents for various purposes between 1989 and 2001 87
- The diagram below shows the changes which took place in a coastal area called pentland from 1950 and 2007 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the diagrams below
- The graph below shows the amount of electricity produced from different energy sources to supply the city of New York between 1980 and 2000 62
- Many foods are shipped from far away Some people think that eating local food is better environmentally and economically Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages 89
- Some people argue that we should do research into our family history. Others agree with the view that we should focus on the present and future generations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ant difference between two kinds of room . Besides, there are two beds, two booksh...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'windows'?
Suggestion: windows
...e similar position. While there are two window in the right of the double room and a t...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'window' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'windows'.
Suggestion: windows
...e similar position. While there are two window in the right of the double room and a t...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ble inside the room, the single one has no any tables or windows.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50299401198 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41088329801 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479041916168 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9977990722 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369401324883 0.215688989381 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216104760337 0.103423049105 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154161088014 0.0843802449381 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304648466683 0.15604864568 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143671198124 0.0819641961636 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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