The diagrams illustrated the process of building an igloo
The flow-chart represents how Inuit people constructe an igloo.
It can be seen that the igloo is built solely by snow with 13 stages. The process begins at finding hard-packed snow ,and ends at making holes in wall or roof.
Looking at the igloo building process in details, those hard-packed snow are havest into blocks by specialized saw. In the first row, large blocks are used to make the base of the dwelling while the rest blocks' edges are cut to be smoother. After that, the Inuits will stacked those bricks up into the half-sphere shape with a last opening on top. Before filling the hexagon space by a snow block which is a bit larger than the hole, the entrance is created by digging a large hole under the wall.
After finishing putting blocks, the eighth stage in the process shows that to cement all the crevices on the wall, snow is shovelled and packed by hand in both external and internal the igloo. Finally, before the process finishes by making some holes for ventilation, 4 big snow blocks are used to cover the entrance way
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 73
- Some people think that advertising aimed at children should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes for example working for a charity improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children Do you agree or disagree 56
- The diagrams illustrated the process of building an igloo 78
- The diagrams illustrates the process of building an igloo 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ocess begins at finding hard-packed snow ,and ends at making holes in wall or roof...
^^
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'stack'
Suggestion: stack
...e smoother. After that, the Inuits will stacked those bricks up into the half-sphere sh...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60962566845 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3027833292 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620320855615 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8401445982 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159523216952 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708156594558 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665042002486 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108095204519 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317697337963 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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