The diagrams illustrate the difference in a student common room during the 5 year period.
Overall, there has been numerous changes in this place. The student common room has become much more well-equipped and well - furnished.
The entrance has remained at the left corner of the map. The equipment, which are placed at the upper right corner, have had some changes. A bench has been replaced by a microwave over 5 years.
The tables, which place at the central of the room, are modernized. The round tables give way to bigger table but take less spaces. The table, which is positioned at the bottom 5 years ago, is taken the place by a bench for laptops. That changes help the room become larger and have more space to move.
Noticeably, the cupboard placed at the bottom right corner is replace by television and armchair. The space around that cupboard have been equipped by drinks mechine.
- The diagrams show changes in a student common room 56
- Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in their hometown Do the advantages of learning a new language this way outweigh the disavantages 73
- The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel s customer service The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...remained at the left corner of the map. The equipment, which are placed at the uppe...
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...placed by a microwave over 5 years. The tables, which place at the central o...
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...y to bigger table but take less spaces. The table, which is positioned at the botto...
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...larger and have more space to move. Noticeably, the cupboard placed at the b...
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... around that cupboard have been equipped by drinks mechine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85806451613 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42848907175 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.3152066769 43.030603864 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.75 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.9166666667 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212387181641 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781157279436 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115993754606 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146921739342 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148995702723 0.0819641961636 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.02 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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