The diagrams show the stages amd equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the concrete for building purposes.
The presented graphical representation illustrates the information about the production aof cement and making of concrete by using some necessary equipments and materials.
It can be seen that,the cement is made by four distincts stages: crushing,mixing,rotating and grinding,and some instuments and contents.To begin with, crush not also limestone but also clay,it can be remain in a powder form.Next,mixed the powder with mixer properly,
then placed it in the circular rotating heater.Asit is in tje rotating heater tube,heat is introduced from the end of the tube before the blend is actually dropped in the grinder.By using grinder,the cement is made,and finally cement is filled in a cement sacks.
The manufacturing of concrete is done by concrete mixture machine and four valueable materials. Add four materials in a accurate proportion:cement (15%),water (10%),Sand (25%),gravel (50%).All materials are mixed in a conrete mixer and mix all well in a clockwise direction.
Overal, it is evident that the steps of making cement are more complicated and required advanced machinery while concrete product require mixing of four components in the right proportion in a sample.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ts and materials. It can be seen that,the cement is made by four distincts stages...
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Suggestion: , mixing
... made by four distincts stages: crushing,mixing,rotating and grinding,and some instumen...
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Suggestion: , and
...s: crushing,mixing,rotating and grinding,and some instuments and contents.To begin w...
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Suggestion: To
...inding,and some instuments and contents.To begin with, crush not also limestone bu...
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..., crush not also limestone but also clay,it can be remain in a powder form.Next,mix...
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Suggestion: Next
... clay,it can be remain in a powder form.Next,mixed the powder with mixer properly, ...
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Suggestion: , mixed
...y,it can be remain in a powder form.Next,mixed the powder with mixer properly, then p...
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Suggestion: Asit
...aced it in the circular rotating heater.Asit is in tje rotating heater tube,heat is ...
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...ater.Asit is in tje rotating heater tube,heat is introduced from the end of the tube ...
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...lend is actually dropped in the grinder.By using grinder,the cement is made,and fi...
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... dropped in the grinder.By using grinder,the cement is made,and finally cement is fi...
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...nder.By using grinder,the cement is made,and finally cement is filled in a cement sa...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ueable materials. Add four materials in a accurate proportion:cement 15%,water 10...
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Suggestion: All
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Message: "required advanced" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'advancing' or 'to be advanced'.
Suggestion: advancing; to be advanced
...ement are more complicated and required advanced machinery while concrete product requir...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, so, then, well, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62569832402 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47256925675 2.65546596893 131% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.417059413 43.030603864 354% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 201.4 112.824112599 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8 22.9334400587 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2 5.23603664747 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201308847683 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10958692238 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794771709688 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11438866179 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788792023767 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.2329268293 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 61.2550243902 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 11.4140731707 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.06136585366 129% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.4329268293 258% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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