The diagrams show the stages and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the concrete for building purposes .
The given flow process reveals the information about the process of cement and concrete production by some material
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It can be seen that ,the process of cement production.There are four steps of the cement production .Firstly, limestone and clay has crusher then change in the powder and secondly powder mixer through the pipe and nextly third stage of production is heat some material with the help of rotating heater and fourth stage of production .The cement production complete with the help of grinder.
As far as trend is concerned that production of concrete that process complete with stage and we need four products .cement ,water,sand and gravel .we should take cement 15%,water10%,sand25%,gravel50% than concrete mixer rotate the clock wise whenever material properly not mixed after than complete that process.
Overall ,it is evident that the steps of making cement as more complicated are require advance machinery while concrete production mixing of component in the right propotion in machine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44303797468 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25825014075 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.31204071 43.030603864 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 215.0 112.824112599 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.5 22.9334400587 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 5.23603664747 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219490824628 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150425640065 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258466433823 0.0843802449381 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150425640065 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258466433823 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.2329268293 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 61.2550243902 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.3012195122 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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