The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive.The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990

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The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive.The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990

The circular chart reveals the four main causes of land degradation ,and the tabular chart illustrates the affected degraded land in three different regions during the year of 1990 .The data is calibrated in percentum.
It can be seen that there are several causes of land degradation.however,the main average of overgrazing 35% furthermore,the causes of less production land that is overgrazing 35%,overcultivation 28%,deforestation30%and other 7% respectively
As far as trend was concerned that,there was three different nation (North America,Europe,Oceania) the highest deforestation had increased in Europe nation was 9.8. After that,the overcultivation ,overgrazing and total land degraded in North America was 3.3,1.5and 5%respectively.in addition to this overgrazing has been increased in Oceania country.
Overall,it is evident that overgrazing activity is the major cause of land degradation.the main causes of deforestation in Europe nation as a campare to deforestation had been decreased in Oceania nation .

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09027777778 4.92477711251 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.29514007916 2.65546596893 162% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.45097560976 131% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 22.4926829268 213% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.91911763 43.030603864 418% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 292.333333333 112.824112599 259% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.0 22.9334400587 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 5.23603664747 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20222197664 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153986779352 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657732436031 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135893350781 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764009160305 0.0819641961636 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.3 13.2329268293 237% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.62 61.2550243902 -4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.51609756098 279% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.6 10.3012195122 249% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.93 11.4140731707 166% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.06136585366 132% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 11.4329268293 289% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.9970731707 193% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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