The differences in wheat exports over three different areas between 1985 and 1990.

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The differences in wheat exports over three different areas between 1985 and 1990.

The wheat selling overseas in some countries between 1985 and 1990 is presented in the line graph.

Overall, Canada wheat exports showed some fluctuations although the one for Australia declined steadily, the figure for European Community showed the reverse and exposed more wheat in the end of the period.

By 1990, both figures for the number of wheat export in Canada and European Community had fallen slightly at the beginning of the year by virtually 4 million, but then the wheat that export by Canadian had risen dramatically to a peak of 25 million while a steady rise had been seen in the European Community. Nevertheless, Australian's Export had risen steadily in the first year, then had continued to decrease steadily to just above 10 million.

Between 1988 and 1990, The Australia declined gradually while European Community inclined sharply to just above 20 million. a dramatic declined was seen in the Canada to well above 10 million and increased to almost the figure in the beginning of the year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '4 million'.
Suggestion: 4 million
... the beginning of the year by virtually 4 millions of tonnes, but then the wheat that export ...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '25 million'.
Suggestion: 25 million
...ian had risen dramatically to a peak of 25 millions of tonnes while a steady rise had been see...
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Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '10 million'.
Suggestion: 10 million
...nued to decrease steadily to just above 10 millions of tonnes. Between 1988 and 1990, The A...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...nity inclined sharply to just above 20. a dramatic declined was seen in the Canad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, nevertheless, so, then, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01734104046 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61642276422 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520231213873 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.656380089 43.030603864 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159825553982 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883411729858 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672092196916 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112961946077 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596116329571 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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