One tool to promote products is through advertising campaign. while promotion contains some merits the demerits outweigh the perceived benefits.
One tool to promote products is through advertising campaign. while promotion contains some merits the demerits outweigh the perceived benefits.
It is undoubtedly that massive rising of advertising have some demerits for citizen. First of all, the aggressive influence of the public figure which show the perfect comfortable life in the television attack the audience actively to be have high standard of living, such as the Indonesia citizen want to be have a satisfied live like Dian Sastro, so those people copy the live standard of this actress to their live. What is more, the aggressive promotion in some brand product encourage the citizen to consume more product continuously than they needs, So the more they follow the hypnotize brand intensively, the more they intend to have all the product of that brands. Come to the Last, some defraud promotion have the opposite assumption from the high-customer expectation, and also some online-shop have down-grade quality with the real-product.
Although some the advertising lead to citizens have some better life. Nowadays, the commercial publishing has a unique ways to educate the audience with give a norm value in their advertising. In Indonesia the assurance promotions educate citizens to have more awareness of future, so these lead to increase the investment of their life. The huge various of promotions give the customer differentiations of product selection, thus the citizen have many range of choice when they meet the needs. In Indonesia there are massive import of skin care product, so the customer have various choice with different range of price. Moreover, the aggressive advertising impact directly with the a dramatic incline of consumption growth. By 2019, economic development had been seen incline gradually by 78%, thus attract the investor to invest in this country.
To sum up, there are some positive impacts and the drawbacks of the massive growth of the advertising for the citizens nowadays.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...oducts is through advertising campaign. while promotion contains some merits the deme...
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Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oducts is through advertising campaign. while promotion contains some merits the deme...
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Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...ume more product continuously than they needs, So the more they follow the hypnotize ...
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Line 3, column 581, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...han they needs, So the more they follow the hypnotize brand intensively, the more they intend...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rade quality with the real-product. Although some the advertising lead to citizens h...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
... the commercial publishing has a unique ways to educate the audience with give a nor...
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Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun range seems to be countable; consider using: 'many ranges'.
Suggestion: many ranges
...roduct selection, thus the citizen have many range of choice when they meet the needs. In ...
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Line 5, column 555, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are massive import of skin care product, so the customer have various choice with...
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Line 5, column 682, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...essive advertising impact directly with the a dramatic incline of consumption growth....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, thus, while, such as, first of all, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33757961783 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84585103409 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53821656051 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7497422309 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.714285714 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312889555615 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149003915255 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.2060757333 0.0667982634062 309% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330588661267 0.151304729494 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.387175726838 0.056905535591 680% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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