Discuss both sides of living with technology and its advantages or living without technology and its disadvantage, the give your opinion.
With the improvement of human society, many factors play effective roles that make the image of life as we see nowadays. Among all effective factors, technology plays the most effective role in modern life. Majority of people these days are crazy about technology while quite a few people suspicious and leery of technology.
Initially, people who are crazy about technology assure that technology is extremely the most crucial change in their life, because of many reasons such as making their life easier through easy communication and transportation, alleviating pressure and stress that they were involved in through artificial intelligence, more affordable commodity they can get via internet easily and making the world as a small village through international organizations, banks, and so forth. Additionally, technology set time aside, thus people nowadays have much time to play, relax and innovate new versatile staffs. Ultimately, technology is considered as something inherent in people's life nowadays due to what I have touched on above.
On the other side, there are those who have a conservative and discreet attitude toward technology. They have this perspective due to a lot of reasons as breaking the decorum among young down through bad views, breaking into people's privacies and affairs, the suspicious speed and accuracy among these new gadgets, and et cetera. Furthermore, technology has adversely affect many people's privacy, money and personality, as well as many samples of people who lose everything they have because of this technology.
Personally, I consider technology a double-edged weapon which means it has advantage and disadvantages. Considering which kind of affects you will get, is extremely depending on the interests for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, thus, well, while, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 965.302439024 156% => OK
No of words: 272.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53308823529 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02319464844 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 106.607317073 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613970588235 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 283.868780488 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 107.592743004 43.030603864 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.818181818 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106374147335 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047010958171 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304837225815 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668864578321 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178814546319 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 61.2550243902 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 40.7170731707 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.4329268293 144% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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