Discuss both sides of living with technology or living without technology including advantages and disadvantages, then give your opinion.
With the improvement of human society, many factors play effective roles that make the image of life as we see nowadays. Among all effective factors, technology plays the most effective role in modern life. majority of people these days are crazy about technology while quite a few people are suspicious and leery of technology.
Initially, people who are crazy about technology assure that technology is extremely the most crucial change in their life, because of many reasons such as making their life easier through easy communication and transportation, alleviating pressure and stress that they have been involving in through artificial intelligence, more affordable commodity they can get via internet easily and making the world as a small village through international organizations, banks, and so forth. Additionally, technology set time aside, thus people nowadays have much time to play, relax and innovate new staffs. Ultimately, technology is considered as something inherent in people's life nowadays, due to what I have touched on above.
On the other side, there are those who have a conservative and discreet attitude toward technology. They have this perspective due to a lot of reasons as breaking the decorum among young down through bad views, breaking into people's privacies and affairs, the suspicious speed and accuracy among these new gadgets, and et cetera. Furthermore, technology has adversely affected many people's privacy, money and personality, as well as many samples of people who lose everything they have because of this technology.
Personally, I consider technology a double-edged weapon which means it has advantage and disadvantages. Considering which kind of affects you will get, is extremely depending on the interests for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, thus, well, while, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52014652015 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02626181003 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 109.39004442 49.4020404114 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119080855854 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539427792718 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428109412523 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770217634698 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225730917681 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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