Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by its external appearance. Use specific details and reasons to support your answer.
Don't judge people by the cover. I totally agree with this opinion and think that every single person can't says negative words for another people.
Firstly, what visible in eyes uncertainty correspond with what exist in brain. All people should be selective to valuated someone because what we think sometimes not true. In other words, Most of people just follow their instict without checked the fact, moreover sometimes only heard about some information from another person and wan't to know from another point of view. For instance, I have a lot of friends with the different characters and my first impression to her is very nice person because her face is very positive vibes, however after I know her for a long time she is not like what i think, she likes to talking about another people but in the different case, she always together with who she talked. That's why we must to know specifically about people around us foremost our friends.
Secondly, bad person will stay in behind of the nice face. Sometimes, we never know about what every people thinking about something even they want to make crime. On the other hand, we can't distinguish among good person and bad person, nowdays many people became toll from violence that is because they can't be carefull for found someone with a good attitude. For example, in Aceh many couple when their get a broke from their relationship and a guy can't accept with the decision and thinking how to make the woman difficult to surviving her life until the end the man decided to killing the woman, from this case we can learn about the best person and the bad person. Thus, People we think at the first time we meet was a good person not neceassarily became a best person in our life.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
Dont judge people by the cover. I totally ag...
^^^^
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nion and think that every single person cant says negative words for another people....
^^^^
Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'think'.
Suggestion: sometimes think
...ive to valuated someone because what we think sometimes not true. In other words, Most of peopl...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 188, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...ink sometimes not true. In other words, Most of people just follow their instict without check...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 595, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...er for a long time she is not like what i think, she likes to talking about anoth...
^
Line 2, column 714, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...he always together with who she talked. Thats why we must to know specifically about ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 727, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ether with who she talked. Thats why we must to know specifically about people around u...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nt to make crime. On the other hand, we cant distinguish among good person and bad p...
^^^^
Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...toll from violence that is because they cant be carefull for found someone with a go...
^^^^
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun couple seems to be countable; consider using: 'many couples'.
Suggestion: many couples
...h a good attitude. For example, in Aceh many couple when their get a broke from their relat...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...broke from their relationship and a guy cant accept with the decision and thinking h...
^^^^
Line 3, column 759, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...s a good person not neceassarily became a best person in our life.
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, talking about, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 306.0 196.424390244 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25446618883 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 106.607317073 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552287581699 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 283.868780488 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.7708495334 43.030603864 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.23603664747 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103631789774 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451010403711 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0164614255164 0.0843802449381 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835487038636 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168360944077 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
Dont judge people by the cover. I totally ag...
^^^^
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nion and think that every single person cant says negative words for another people....
^^^^
Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'think'.
Suggestion: sometimes think
...ive to valuated someone because what we think sometimes not true. In other words, Most of peopl...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 188, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...ink sometimes not true. In other words, Most of people just follow their instict without check...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 595, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...er for a long time she is not like what i think, she likes to talking about anoth...
^
Line 2, column 714, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...he always together with who she talked. Thats why we must to know specifically about ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 727, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ether with who she talked. Thats why we must to know specifically about people around u...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nt to make crime. On the other hand, we cant distinguish among good person and bad p...
^^^^
Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...toll from violence that is because they cant be carefull for found someone with a go...
^^^^
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun couple seems to be countable; consider using: 'many couples'.
Suggestion: many couples
...h a good attitude. For example, in Aceh many couple when their get a broke from their relat...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...broke from their relationship and a guy cant accept with the decision and thinking h...
^^^^
Line 3, column 759, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...s a good person not neceassarily became a best person in our life.
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, talking about, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 306.0 196.424390244 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25446618883 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 106.607317073 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552287581699 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 283.868780488 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.7708495334 43.030603864 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.23603664747 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103631789774 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451010403711 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0164614255164 0.0843802449381 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835487038636 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168360944077 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.